What do you think of January Cantata poem?

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What more to be done, winter…
What more to be asked…
What are you doing with the
Brown leaves…

Except…
Excercising…exorcising…what
Elements of fire, air, Earth, water
Elementals….

Or, are you the warrior…
Of gods danced with, to, for…
Ornaments of Spring…with all the
Orchestrations

Witholding green, until your blood
Wickens the fields…

Quickens the Child?
This was written in the 'Cantata' form of choral composition.

WINTER ABATING THE BUDS FORMING ALL IN A MESSAGE OF HOPE.
My heart was singing aloud. I just love it.

13 Responses to “What do you think of January Cantata poem?”

  1. Melissa says:

    ehhh
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  2. popeyethesadist says:

    Was her nic "Mrs. Obvious"?
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  3. jenny says:

    Quite a choir you assembled, with your baton, taking on old man
    winter so bravely, the music is deafing.
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  4. Sin says:

    Hmmm….had to read a time or two …to insure your talking about what I thought you were…love that dancing.!
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  5. *Maddam Blue Damselfly* says:

    Wicked, my dear, simply wicked !
    Now I must go dance..
    give me some music
    please
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  6. Dondi says:

    Vo – lar – e, oh, oohh.
    Can – tar – e, oh, oh oh ohh.

    Opps, you wrote cantata, nor cantare. Oh well, guess I better research that one.
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  7. Shhawnconnery says:

    Who ish thish Cantata woman? I think I'd like to shnog her. If I havn't already.
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  8. giggles says:

    Had to read it and then go through it slowly.

    Love the form

    going to dance now!
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  9. Coop 366 says:

    Good but I did not know what it is called, 'Cantata'
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  10. spirit says:

    Very nice. I can't wiat to dance with the fairy maids of Spring.
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  11. octogen says:

    WINTER ABATING THE BUDS FORMING ALL IN A MESSAGE OF HOPE.
    My heart was singing aloud. I just love it.
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  12. Kate Alex Bahleef says:

    More superstition? I expect you can sing and dance about it too. Looked it up. Learn a new thing every day, at least that's what I say Cantata : a composition for one or more voices usually comprising solos, duets, recitatives, and choruses and sung to an instrumental accompaniment
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  13. Britney Spears says:

    I don't get it. It's 80 degrees today.
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