What do you think of this poem?

it was a song in my old band i was in, but my songs are more poetry than songs you know?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VSB0NK7XrXw i played it once in front of people if you would like to see it on music
it’s called
Suicide River
Isolated by a river that no-one sees
Bleeding by a river no-one can heal
Red waters gracefully [...]

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